Wow Liam, I liked your movie about obesity and how it effects you life. You have spread the message well about obesity! You have used effective pictures and added facts. Your next step is to make some pictures longer so that we can read all the words.
Dear Liam, I think that your movie was well done because it showed the message well. A next step for you would be to make your pictures longer for everyone to be able to read them. -Sumak
Yo tell that people need to cut down on fast food.
ReplyDeleteNext time you could add more facts.
Wow Liam,
ReplyDeleteI liked your movie about obesity and how it effects you life. You have spread the message well about obesity! You have used effective pictures and added facts.
Your next step is to make some pictures longer so that we can read all the words.
From Elayna 8-)
Dear Liam,
ReplyDeleteI think that your movie was well done because it showed the message well.
A next step for you would be to make your pictures longer for everyone to be able to read them.
-Sumak